Broken Girl

Tattered Wings,
Teary eyes,
Broken Heart,
Bloody cries.

The story of a troubled girl,
Lost inside her empty world...

She sat alone hating herself,
wishing she could die.
She couldn't remember a single day,
to where she wouldn't cry.

Her parents always hated her,
She had no real true friends.
Here is her sad tale,
and how it really ends.

The troubled girl with her miserable world,
One day had to much.
She wrote a note to her mom and dad,
A note which they still clutch.

She looked into her bathroom mirror,
she hated her appearance.
She broke the mirror and watched it smash,
she stared down at the broken glass.
Her Pitiful Existence...

She picked up a jagged piece,
and got a crazy thought.
She stroked the shard across her wrist,
the blood ran down so thick and hot.

Again and again,
across her wrist.
till her vision started to fade,
the thought of death was nothing new
so she was not afraid.

She was a girl so beautiful,
but she never knew.
about all of the love she had,
and the gifts she could do.

a girl so young,
only thirteen.
and now do you ask why?
well i was that girl...
with the tear stained face
Now an angel that can't fly...

please comment and tell me how to make it better this is my first poem