Won't you? Will you?

by undying blusher   Jul 13, 2005


(This is my weak little song that, for some reason, people seems to like *shrugs*)

I want to hold your hand
Won't you except mine?
I want to understand
Won't you help me?
I want to hug you
Won't you let me?

Will you pull your hand away?
I can't say
Will you let me listen to your heart?
Hear what lingers in that broody head?
I don't know
Will you open up your arms?
Or push me away?
I don't know
I can't say

Doubt fills my mind
Will it stay?
I just can't say
But I hope one day
You'll answer my questions
And hopefully
You'll let me stay
Better yet, want me to

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Ben

    hey, thanx for the comments on mypoems, its much appreciated. I really like this, its ....i dunno, short and sweet, but really good. Thanx again
    Ben

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    This would make a good song. My band would have liked it 3 months ago if we didn't turn from emo to screamo!

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    awwww very sweet i loved it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by wellthoughtoutwords

    aww that's really good!! i dont think its bad!! good job!