We Can Make It, Together

by Carlee Ann   Jul 13, 2005


I sigh, defeated
It's yet another fight
We're falling apart
And I don't know if we'll be alright

I look around me
And everyone is losing friendship
Friends are becoming strangers
Does it have to be like this?

I don't want to end what we have
I don't want to lose you
But it's becoming really clear
We might not make it through

Every time we talk
We agree to refuse
I want to stop all this
We have too much to lose

Sometimes I'm right
And other times I'm wrong
But why is it so hard
For us to just get along?

Every time we fight
I can't stop thinking about all I said
And peace leaves my heart
And fills with regret instead

So just tell me something
So we can be ok
Because the way things are going
I may not last another day

There are times I can't stand you
But the good times keep us going
We're making it for now
But we're struggling, and it's showing

I don't want to lose this
But I need your help more than ever
I don't want to be alone
We can make it, together

Don't go blaming me anymore
And I'll let down my guard
Just give me the word
And we will go far

The same old arguments
Taint everything we do
We can float or sink
But that's entirely up to you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by none

    I still havent the slightest clue to whats happening...but I sincerely love and care about you both so much. If you could both read my new poem i would apprieceate it tons! and for now heres a quote... ~life isn't fair...it is just fairer then death thats all~ take care now ok!
    Chelsea

  • 18 years ago

    by courtney

    omg... u guys gotta go on. if you dont then there's no hope for the rest of us... but both of you need to be alright with that. i know its hard but i also know what its like to loose a best friend(i've lost a lot!!! it sucks!!!) i hope you both are okay... just FYI my e-mail is no longer working so if you need me comment on here or myspace. hope u guys are okay. much love!!!
    -cort

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Car, Zac, listen to me because this is really important. You're friends, if you haven't noticed, not enemies! You're not built to fight each other, you're both destroying yourselves fighting over....what? nothing? Pain doesn't go away, it's everywhere, in every friendship, but that's what makes it stronger, when that friend can help you through it. Zac has been there for you for....God I don't know...so long, and it's likewise too.. Your friendship should be endless, and I'd hate to see you two blowing your brains out over each other. You're both sorry, hell!! I'm even sorry...i don't know what for, but I'm sorry. Maybe because it makes me so sad to see two people I love to death bickering like this with talk of an end to the friendship...it isn't right.

    I love you, Car..nice poem, really beautiful, and sad all the same...didn't you even put it under sad....or no wait..its under miscellaneous, I remember, lol.

    ~Sierra

    __Meatball Hoagie#2__

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    A good strong true friendship will survive the worst of times. True friends will suffer through each others pain, someone is always bound to get hurt, but with love and understanding you can make that friendship last forever. Hang in there, the two of you, you can make it work..... a very touching and heartfelt write.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by JustAFoolInLove

    car... you said you wouldnt be able to carry on without me. you've been without me, essentially, for the past week or so... i keep making you hurt, i keep making you hate me, and even if you do forgive me... i dont want to cause you pain. if you CAN go without putting up with my shit... i dont know, car. i just want to stop all the negativity

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