I really like it, its very good, it has alot of emotion in it that i can really relate to...

If u get the chance can you comment on my poem called blue eyed angel, it would mean alot bc its for my friend

this is really good keep writing

5/5

I definitely relate to this one as well...parts of it anyway...I hope you don't go through with anything fatal though...you did a lovely job with the poem. I think you've got a great gift...easily relatable topics...honest words....and the form is super on this one...the lines are all nearly the same length and it flows well.

xxx

Aww very good poem! 5

great work mwa!! ur realy talented stephy :):)

amazing.. ! really liked it .. ! i'll give u a 5 on this one

Hey that was really good.. i cant really relate to it but the flow was amazing.. i mean its like a good book you just cant stop reading it.. thats talent at least thats what i think talent is.. amazing!! bye bye EJ

aw this is so sad....i loved how it flowed so nicely and how i could relate to it so much its almost scary...you just captured my thoughts and put them down for me loved it!! 5/5

Very powerful and moving poem. I like how you write with such feeling & emotion. It makes poetry better to back it like you have in this one.
-Kate

another great work from u!!! keep it up!!!!!!! take care!!!

*~peace and love~*

This poem is so SAD!! OMG...I almost cried! I really loved it. The flow was amazing, and the poem itself was intense. You're a very talented poet! Keep it up!!!

Sydney