Hello razor

by [crimson] tearz_fall   Jul 13, 2005


Hello razor, I'm holding you in my hand again, I know that your my enemy but right now you feel like my closest friend
Your so cold and lifeless as can be, as I hold you tighter you softly whisper that you can do that for me
I know thats not what i really want, and any one can see, but no one else is here right now Razor, its just you and me
I know that people will miss me, and be sad that I'm gone, but I'm not here as it is I've been dead inside all along
Your always there when I need you Razor, like no one else could ever be, so if you really care slide yourself along the wrist that belongs to me

~please comment i really appreciate it~

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  • 18 years ago

    by iDeePanda

    Hey..sorry it took so long to return the favor, but as i promised im gonna read some of ur poems and comment....well anyway, this was...i dont even have the wordz...wayyyy better than anything i could ever write

  • 18 years ago

    by x. Sleeping Beauty .x

    I love this poem.. ive never seen a poem about cutting written this way. please keep writing.. youre so good.
    x x x Zowie x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ixora

    i like this poem a lot...it sounds so honest and i can say i know what u mean ... wonderful..and thanx for the comment, yes i acctualy wrote it but i was just bored.. i didnt think it was that good but thanx..
    *^*crow*^*

  • 18 years ago

    by katelyn

    Superb effort on youre efficiant writting of this poem. i highly recoment you keep writting for youre work is to great a specticle to keep hidden among youreself. i hope to see more of your beatufil talent

    sincerly katelyn jones

  • 18 years ago

    by KissesInTheRain

    Excellant poem, I am majorly impressed I have been trying so daggone long to write a poem about cutting I just cant seem to get it out. Excellant job.

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