Just
by Emma Jul 14, 2005
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It's just one kiss. |
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17 years ago
by Jessica
Short, sweet, and to the point! nice job. it could have maybe been a little longer but i thought it was good that you conveyed so many feelings in only three lines! keep it up!
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18 years ago
by Sole
I agree, you could have elaborated a little more - but then perhaps that would ruin the simplicity of it. Well done!
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18 years ago
by Minkus
A bit short. 4/5 nonetheless.
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18 years ago
by dragonfly
That is so true...people think their "just" doing whatever, when they are really messing with peoples hearts.
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18 years ago
by Justin
really good for such a short poem! 5/5 and thx for the comment on my latest poem, I appreciated it alot =)
