To be the best

by NK   Jul 14, 2005


These pains run down my legs
I've been running all day long,
Because i find I'm not fit enough
To play my favorite song.

I'll try and try my very best
I'll get fitter everyday,
But no matter how hard i seem to try
It'll never go my way.

I've been trying now for six straight months
Trying harder every time,
I think i need more motivation
So now I've come to rhyme.

You have no idea how hard it is
For me to compete with you,
And although every time i lose
I'm never feeling blue.

I've bet you before I'll do it again
I just need time you see,
The day will come when I'll be the best
And you'll be looking up to me.

*#- i found this while cleaning up.. i wrote it about 5 weeks ago...-#*

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  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    interesting poem...its original like most your stuff.
    well done i liked the flow like always...
    man im running out of things to say!!!
    it shows your determint(sp?) to win to be number 1 and that your willing to work to get there....good meaning!!!

    Xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin

    Well, 5 weeks ago, have you beaten him yet? Excellent poem, although the question is, once you have beaten this person, will you lose motivation, or will you have another goal to aim at. The point is, sometimes it is better to be in "Second Place", so you always strive for more. Take care, excellent write, very flunt and well written.

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