You need to move on! Find someone who will care for you and treat you the way you deserve to be treated. I can feel your pain. This was really well written as always! You're an amazing poet keep on posting I am a big fan of your work. The flow was perfect! Take Care! Brooke =)

wow i lvoe the last line. good poem keep writing and stay strong:)

hey, EXCELLENT poem, really powerful emotion. I really liked the read, and i know, many, including myself can relate to it. If i was forced to nit pick i would say the only i would change is maybe adding another syllable to this line, it seems just a little short (in my opinion, and i am often wrong)

"You kicked me, while I was down."

But besides that Its an amazing poem, and you did a great job. You definately get a 5.

Lovely...maybe some imagery would make it more original...but great poem as is.

xxx

awww
what a great poem
well written and well expressed
lov it hun
really you MUST keep going
im with you
take care
Nema
XoXoXoXoX

Excellent poem, I really liked it.

Clouds n ur Is.

this was a great poem...it started off one way then got to another but bye the end you got back on track...i do that sometimes too
5/5
bloodscars

loved the poem. wow going though something like that myself. *wipes tears away* it was great keep up the good work.
5/5 emma

ooo! i love this poem! this was hella good! great job! i LOVE the ending! keep it up and take care.:)

hey love the poem!! great work 5/5
<3 courtie

That was really good, i think there are a few too many commas, which makes it hard to read, but i really liked it and what it had to say :D

omg excuse me while i cry my eyes out... that poem is awesome and really hit too way too close to home here cuz thats exactlly what im goin thru i love this part right here

You are so blind, you cannot see.
Something so great, that is me.
I'm in the dark, crying tonight.
Wishing things, could be alright.

i think that to myself all the time when im on the phone with him... he complains about girls that hurt him and im sitting there thinkin i'd never hurt you.... awesome job i love it great job

Awesome poem! I have felt the exact same wy before. Your a great poem and i cannot wait to read more! 5/5!

"You aren't worth, the time I've spent.
When I wondered, where the time went.
You broke my heart and I hate you.
Get over him, so I can get over you."
I like this stanza a lot and it is great as your closing statement, because it leaves a lasting idea. Your work is wonderful - keep it up. (5/5)

wow. the first verses of this poem reminds me of myself. beautiful poem and keep up the great work. 5/5
love ya,
paulette

Wow. powerful piece. reminds me of my last relationship lol. the flow was awesome, the words divine. you are a new find for me on this site. love your work.

Hey I really enjoyed reading this poem, it was written really well and it flowed perfectly, nice work :) it was awsome.
thanks for all the comments and tips on my poems, they're realyl helpful and i'll definatly keep them in mind when writting more stuff. sorry i took so long to comment on your poems but my computer went all messed up and i couldnt really get on. byee thanks again and i think you're poems are great, i hope ill be able to write stuff half as good when i improve writing poetry :) xxx

Wow...I hope this girl is out of your life. It is so crazy how I can relate to your poetry...not a girl lof course... I had a guy that pulled that same shit. Anyways...great poem and thanks for the comments on mine

xoxo
Kayla

Aww, That was saaadd.

Really really good though. I l.o.v.e.d it! Yup. I did *nods*

You're gonna have to start writing heaps more poems, cause I think I'm slowy running ouuut. Lol

Awesome poem, It was really goood =P 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.