I loved that poem and I only have one suggestion...

"i have loved a woman
i have loved her with everything i have inside MYSELF"

myself just sounds a little more mature i think...or something like that, that part just caught me.

But I really liked that poem, you shouldn't be unsure of it because it's really great, be confident!! 5/5...and keep up the great work!

xoxo-Sierra Rae

I really liked the poem but verses 2 and 4 seemed a bit rushed or not as well flowing as the rest. But it was good :D

great job once again, i love your writing style, very descriptive and meaningful! 5/5

gr8 job uv done ther.. strong emotion.. very well written
keep up the talent
nouna

:( that's really sad .... your so talented it makes me wonder why I even bother writing

mourn the lose of you
- lose should be loss*

on a better note..i Loved this poem. I understand exactly what this is talking about...i wish i could have put my words into something like this. this was beautifully dark...it brought out alot of emotions in me, and thats a great thing in poetry!

very good...full of emotion and i like that...keep it up...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Awwl.. That poem is a heartbreaker. But I still absoluetly loved it. I can tell that you put alot of emotion into it and thats what made it so great! Great Job cannot wait to read more of your work. I would have given it a 6 xox Britney xox

wow unrequited one, thats another poem that proves your name, it was brillant! so many sad emotions there, great job i love reading these wonderful poems!
weeping wolf/ stray

I voted 5/5

aww.. its really sad, you're very good at expressing your feelings into words. *darn* i wish i could do that! :P lol can't wait to read more!!:D
.¤rAnDomNeSS brUnEttE¤.

aww i loved it soo much!! it was soo good 5/5 definetly

take care
much love
shannon

I... I was really touched by this poem. I'm close to tears...that's partly because of something else, but this could've definitely been a trigger...anyway, I love it...

"what does it feel like to be loved?
i want someone to tell me, for i fear that i am missing out on the most precious thing that life can give"

...I feel that way... :(

the unrequited one...it happens to the good ones... and it seems as if that's just the way it goes, and it will never change...but you've got to keep hope... as hard as it may be...

xxx

wow, bravo, this is very well written. I can actually feel what you are feeling. Well done

Yeah, I remember this one...