Frozen

by Unrequited   Jul 18, 2005


Forgotten
frozen in time
a gift that no one will receive
i am alone
and no one will see
what life's torture
has done to me

so strong, i try
nothing left, i fall
i drown in your love
you give to me your all

i am so ashamed
of what i have become
but God gives me strength
to face all i've done
i hold you tight as the flames ignite
i will love you until we must say goodnight
and breathe life's last breath

we are one
forgotten
frozen in stone
my love is a gift that only you will know
i am not alone
not anymore
my heart, no more is it made of stone

i don't believe in second chances
yet here i am,
asking you for a third
i've broken your heart
and watched you die inside
yet here you are,
asking me to hold you tight
and to never let you go
this time, i am here to stay
forever, i will love you so

i'm sorry for my faults
yet you love me so
forever frozen in time
i will never let you go

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  • 18 years ago

    by bucky

    yup the girl in the forum was right this poem is awsome ... well done 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    beautiful piece.. gr8 emotion.. excellent wording..
    keep it ups!!
    nouna

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    It seems to me that through most of it you're speaking to God...faith is important and love is amazing...

    "i hold you tight as the flames ignite" - I see you fit the flame in this one too...nicely done ;)

    You have such a gift for poetry...never stop writing!

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BloodScars

    wow...that was great...alot emotion and it flowed so nicely great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ...:NiKi:...

    i love it! great job explaining the emotions that capture the moment!!!!! congrats 5/5

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