True world

by broken_dreams_broken _heart   Jul 18, 2005


I feel isolated
no pain no fears
no highs or lows
no screaming tears

no anger no love
no worn out face
i just don't care
who wins the race

i feel strange
i feel so numb
i cant explain it
i know its dumb

but it feels so good
Cos i can't feel pain
like no one can hurt me
ever again

i feel spaced out
like I'm not really here
I'm 2 steps behind me
a ghost with no fear

emotions cant find me
my mind is free
to see this new Earth
this true world i see

this was written when i was feeling really strange, so I'm sorry if it doesn't make much sense!

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  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    it makes sense to me, i kinda feel lk some of the stuff you mentioned. hey, you write really good poems. like really. I love ur work.

  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    hey it makes perfect sense.. at least for me.. i understand it!! i like it.. being a poet is about expressing things in different ways and this poem really does that!! good job.. bye bye EJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Interesting. By the way thank you for your comment. This poem was simply stunning for content. Not that it really seemed very good the way it was presented was nice.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kendall

    It had a nice flow.

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