Her life (dont skip this poem)

by Emmaleigh   Jul 20, 2005


When she was little life was good
Not a care in the world
not one problem she faced

As she got older she realized
she was all alone
no one to stand by her side

She started crying her self to sleep
She hated everything
And no one knew

Pain hit her harder everyday
Until it was in control her life was hell
and she had no way out

Cutting entered her life
As a friend
she needed some way to be happy

Every cut became worse and worse
She felt so alive
As she watched the blood drip

But after the bleeding stopped
the tears began to flow
the emptiness was never gone....

Please vote and comment this is only part one of this poem but i would love to have you guys vote Many good poems get left out because no one reads or never votes

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  • 18 years ago

    by Synyster

    This poem is like looking in a mirror. I really like it. Your structure is good and your phrasing is neat and flows well. It's an easy read in that sense, but it's such a sad, but realistic work that it's not as easy. Thank you for writing this. It opened my eyes a bit seeing myself in that poem and I'm sure it'll help others who read it too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rochelle

    i like that poem it is really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsi

    Good job!! Very sad! Keep writin!! 5/5