Her Life pt 2( dont ignore this poem)

Emptiness was never gone
she looks how far
her life has fallen

nothing left
no hope inside
Is death her only way out

she knows what she has to do
end it now
before shit gets worse

she walks in her room
starting to cry
begging god why her why now

she holds the shinny blade
in her hands
for one last time

She writes a letter to them all
saying she sorry
that she never wanted to fall and her time was over

she pushes the knife deep within her chest
falling to the floor
Taking her last little breath

Please tell me what you think i worked hard on this poem