Plea My Insainity

by Chelsea   Jul 20, 2005


I plea my insanity. For many days to come.
I know its kinda crazy, but the pain has just begun.
It won’t seem to process, how this just isn’t a phase.
This will be my life for many nights and many days.
Little can they tell, that I’m dying inside,
I can’t be by myself! My friends should be here right here beside.
Unless they want to see me sadly plea my insanity.

I watch and watch but I can’t learn.
And the emotions of anger thy show only burns.
They think yelling is the answer although I can prove that untrue.
I’m too hard to change that’s just what I do.
They wanna believe that isolation me will make me change.
That maybe I will rearrange.
But I am only learning how to hate n be hated.
Their techniques are old and outdated.
Yet. They still want me to plea my insanity.

I cant plea my insanity. They can’t win!
For them the lie between winning and losing is very thin.
I just wish they would open their eyes and release.
That everyday that goes by. My love for them just kinda dies.
If I could fly, I would touch the sky.

But no. They made me plea my insanity.
I tried so hard.
Maybe I could stop feeling like a retard.
But not having anyone in your life is the worst part of all.
I guess that’s the main reason I took my big fall.
They finally got me to plea.
My insanity.

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  • 18 years ago

    by kevin

    Dont listen to james you need to get the message across i think it was a great poem and i hope you keep it up i like your style it gets the point across i know what your saying and i feel for you and i want to say keep it up you have nothing to worry about your peotry is amazing and i will read all your new ones!!! keep the good work up and i will try and work on mine thanl you for the comment i will try my hardest to use all of your sugestions...

    keep it up

    a new friend in poetry kevin

  • 18 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    In the third line maybe switch the words "just" and "isn't" it flows better that way...6th line the rythm is a little off...try at the end switching it to "by my side" instead of "right here beside" in the 2nd stanza you have thy instead of they...isolation should be isolating...you have lie instead of line...realease should be realize...and one big one...instead of plea-which i believe means something like beg, i think you mean plead...which means something like declare.

    Now don't get me wrong, i LOVE this poem! you have major talent for being 14, you just have some common mistakes...plead my insanity is a great line, very original, very cool. You seriously have SOOOO much talent, I hope you don't think I went too hard on you, I'm just trying to help!!! and if you want, you can critique a poem of mine to hell :P
    You are so talented, never drop your pen! KIU! oh and I'm adding you to my favorites RIGHT NOW so i can follow you becoming famous!! lol...ur good girl, ya really are!
    xoxo-Sierra Rae

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