My dying wish

by Unrequited   Jul 21, 2005


Just leave me alone...

i sit and hide
inside my cave
unknown to others
i want it that way

always been hurt
my pain is eternal
no one even cares
my love stays internal

blackened scars
bloodied face
too much in my past
just give me space

just leave me alone
don't look at me
my life is worthless
please let me be
numb is a feeling i can embrace...

dying alone,
i pray for the end
inside my cave
soon angels will descend

my lover has left
my friends said goodbye
without that love
there's no reason to try

just leave me alone
don't look at me
my life is worthless
please let me be
numb is something i long to feel....

undisturbed
i fade away
into the darkness
where i will stay

everything is gone
as the angels take me away
but even though you hurt me
i'll love you all anyway

i am asleep
forever unknown
thanks to all who listened to me
and left me alone

numb is the feeling i will forever embrace...

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  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Amazing, I love this poem...It's so emotional and very touching!!! I relate so much!!! Hope that you are ok???Very beautifully written, perfect flow and rhyming...

    *Hugs sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by BloodScars

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    *tear* Sadly, I can relate to that...beautifully written...man, I still have tons of yours I haven't read yet...I'll get to them all eventually...

    And thanks for mentioning me at the end of your profile thing...that was very kind of you :)

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by natalie

    I like it, i love the imagery of it. Perhaps the lines starting with numb is...etc should be spaced out on their own, not joined to the paragragh thingy before. It might read better. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Synyster

    I can feel your pain as you express it in this work. I know that feeling of numbness and know how you feel. Beautiful piece.

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