I'll always be right there

by XxTeArSxX17   Jul 23, 2005


I’LL ALWAYS BE RIGHT THERE

I am not sure I can
do it I am not
so sure I can handle
you being around
yes I love you and
that’s what makes
it harder for I know
that in my heart
your moving on and
I am still standing
in the same ground,
wishing your my man
wish I was you girl but
were so very far
apart in like different
world and your look for
a new love that
could possibly be till the
end, and I hate it when you
said that girl is pretty then
maybe I’ll go holler at her
and in side I know I just
what to break down and cry
but I smile and say go for it,
maybe she can be your baby
maybe she can be you life,
when I know that your
everything to me your what
I want, and it hurts so much
but that I guess you don’t know,
hell I don’t think you even care,
but just know I’ll always be right there,

~ASHLEIGH~

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    great job girl keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    i liek how u made it a story type poem good work! xox fallen

  • 18 years ago

    by Libby M

    Hey,

    I thought that you did a good job at writing this poem. The only suggestion I have is, I think that it would be easier for the reader if you can place your comma's and periods, that way, the reader will be able to stop and know when it is a complete sentence and when your thought ended. All in all, You did excellent.

    God Bless.
    Libby