Take my hand

by Idiosyncratic   Jul 24, 2005


Take my hand
It says
As if it were planned
That it would rescue me

Take my hand
It says to me
It's a demand
But just barely

Take my hand
It says
It understands
Or pretends to

Take my hand
It says to me
I'll help you stand
Forget your fall

Take my hand
It says
Come feel the land
Feet flat on ground

Take my hand
It says to me
I acquiesce and
It lets me go

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  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    I really enjoyed this one. The repetition made it interesting, and kept it together. This one also made me think a lot. It seemed deep, and full of feelings, I could tell you were feeling hard for what you were writing.

    Great poem!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The repeation in every stanza made the flow like water. The word choice again was simple but great, and the emtion was clear. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    I loved this poem. I think it flowed very well, and I think it was beautifully written. Keep it up. xX

  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    hey that was good.. i really like it.. and i liked how you use the "take my hand it says" in every stanza!! that really makes the poem! thanks so much for commenting on my poem!! it really means alot to me!! bye bye EJ

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