The End (Part 2 of "The Run")

by Mandy Lou   Jul 24, 2005


I have no time
Before you are upon me
Mind screaming, no one hearing
I'm left alone with you
The moment I have been fearing

Eyes squeezed shut
I await the pain
Every muscle tense
No point in trying
The fear is so immense

I sink lower
Losing myself in the dark
I give myself to the fear
I cannot stand against it
Laughter, the only thing I hear

Pain consumes me
Eating away at what's left
In the dark, all alone
I've ended the fight
With victory, your eyes shown

World so dark
You're on me now
Terror rising ever more
My blood drains
It pools on the floor

I look up
A picture frozen in my mind
Of this final sin
The end is upon me
Never to be reborn again

**It's been revised...tell me what you think!**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley_LOVES_Jason

    i gave it a 5 if i could give it a 10 i woulda... keep up all the good work... remember you decide your future....
    ~*~Ashley~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    I gave it a 5 you kept the images going one after another it was very well done, the subject was bold and your telling of it was right on great job you did well little one...

  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Wow... Great poem... great the way you set the pace for the reader... Nice peace! Kind regards from Kane

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    GOOD POEM