Anlone at night

by donnyelle fenton   Jul 26, 2005


At night i look at the stars
wonder why we are apart
wish you would say where you are
cause being alone breaks my heart

i want you at my side
holding me safe with your hands
never telling me goodbye
together we will walk this land

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Such a sad yet meaningful poem. 5/5, Em

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    You have a GREAT talent, I just don't think that you're living up to it...Try to enrich this just a little more...maybe add a stanza or change the rhyming scheme...just a thought...

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    I can really relate to this poem, I feel the exact same way. Great Job. ღ

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    short but gud... its s sweet dorta plea.. i noe that i wud always need my frends with me..
    "together we will walk this land"
    i love that line.. itspeaks volumes..
    keep goin
    nouna

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    good emotions almost is like a love poem?

    Good job

    -Josiah

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