Mirror, mirror on the wall

by cαtαstrophe--x   Jul 26, 2005


Please rate/comment id like to know what you think
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Mirror, mirror on the wall,
Who's the cruelest of them all?
my dear girl, that would be you,
hurting everyone with what you do.

Mirror, mirror on the wall,
why can't you see I'm not selfish at all,
I do what I do because it makes me feel better,
you wouldn't understand..it's like i don't matter.

Mirror, mirror on the wall,
why must you make me feel so small,
I look at you and all i see is disgust,
My reflection is not something I lust.

Mirror, mirror oh how i hate you so,
showing me things that i don't want to know,
Maybe I'm selfish but, so are you,
making me feel so lousy,it is true.

Mirror, mirror on the wall,
I'll show you what its like to feel small,
I'll take you down and throw you on the floor,
stomp on you until your nothing more.

Mirror, mirror who's the cruel one now?
now that your broken, ill take one of your slivers
use it like the cold shiny blade,
skid it across my wrist,
it will all feel the same.

Mirror, mirror Hows it feel to be used?
talked about like your just to amuse,
you were oh so quick to judge,
No one to help you.now your lying there unloved.

(C) Copyright 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Mirror, mirror Hows it feel to be used?
    talked about like your just to amuse,
    you were oh so quick to judge,
    No one to help you.now your lying there unloved.

    Im lovin that stanza...excellent job..you can write poetry..you really can..... you have the talent to speak out to others and its really rare...
    5/5
    ttyl sometime
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by cαtαstrophe--x

    I edited it so it rhymed more.

  • 18 years ago

    by Forsaken Redeemer

    I don't think i need to say any big long compliment, i only need one word.

    Amazing.

    xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by kat

    wow..ya i liked this one..

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Cute but sad poem...lol...5/5 great job...i hope all is good...plz check out some of my poems...thanks..luv yas mwah

    -kayla-