Under Water

by Emma   Jul 28, 2005


I can barely keep my head above.
I feel my lungs filling up.
I hear water pouring.
I see nothing.
My breathing slows.
My heart stops.
I feel nothing.
My life has stopped.
I see Hell.
And i know it has ended.

plez vote and comment. thax.
Emma

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  • 18 years ago

    by WakeboardxChick

    5/5 i think your good at writing. I think you should take the time to right a long poem. Please check out my poems.
    YoUr WhAtEvEr

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    short but powerful words...I think it's really good.

    thanks for the comment :)

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    I don't know why its got such a low rating cuz its really good. It's short and I would lvoe to read it if it was longer but o well good idea too.:)

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