Doesnt deserve a title

by M MEM   Jul 28, 2005


Everything slumped
Frowns, my only facial expression
The urge to just fall
Lay down right here
Let him take me
Hells better than this
This "life"
How can it be called life,
If all i look forward to is dying?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amba

    "How can it be called life,
    If all i look forward to is dying?"
    I love thatpart the best, i hope you get though these times, life does suck sometimes, but sometimes its rad.
    Im here for a chat anytime
    xox Bam

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Very good. Short but sweet. Good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    again short but has so much meaning...you really know how to write what you feel and how to put it in words that mean alot..it like they say a picture can mean 1000 words..well the words that you use can also mean 1000 different meaning

    kaylee

  • 18 years ago

    by healing wounds

    ur a very powerful writer who knows how to use her words...keep up the great work...loved it!

    healing_wounds

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Aw this is really sad hun, is there a particular reason why you wrote it?:( Great description used throughout, again, short but sweet:)

    Ana*