Sorry For Any Pain I Caused

by Amba   Jul 30, 2005


Scarlet Eyes.
Blackened Memories.
Gorse Filled Bed.
Intoxicating Drugs.

Slowly I’ll Pick Away At Myself
Slowly I’ll Disintegrate Into Dust
A Particle.
A Nothing.

Nothing Matters.
Dim, Dull, Dark, Dead.
My Misery And Pain Gone.
Dead. I Wont Feel A Thing.

I Did This Because I Am Nothing,
But A Tear From Your Eye,
A Picture That Fades,
A Hour Of Sadness In Your Thoughts.
An Eternity Of Causing You More Pain.
I’m Sorry.

Thanks for reading this, it was just one of those randum moods i get in.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Beautiful Angel

    I love your poem

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I liked this poem it was different and i could feel your pain! I really enjoyed it and sometimes it's better just to write 'randomly' :) instead of worrying bout flow and all that! K I'll stop now:)
    Wicked Poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    Dim, Dull, Dark, Dead.
    My Misery And Pain Gone.

    I am speechless..this was simply excellent...I felt the sadness within it, probably because I feel like this sometimes..

    Only one little thing...I think you should finish it with "I am sorry", instead of "I'm sorry"...I dunno why..it kinda emphasises that you really are sorry..

    anyways, great poem. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Wow, the first stanza is smashing, I really love it.

    I kept wanting more. Lovely!

    Warm regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Kendall

    awesome

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