Summer's End

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Jul 31, 2005


The sun sets in the distance.
The water slowly washes up the shore.
The trees dance with the wind.
My footsteps print in the sand.

The water caresses my feet.
Sending shivers up my spine.
I wrap my sweater around my shoulders
As the night's coldness envelops me.

I sit in the sand's calmness.
As the colors dance in the sky.
Orange. Red. Yellow.
Summer's end.

© Fighter

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  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    calm..peaceful..beautiful. it comes to life when you read it, almost like being there. good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Darcy![xXkestrelXx]

    Dats really good and true. It givs u n image ob summer's end in ur mind. VERY GOOD! :D

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    great stuff. it is my favourite time of day and you did it justice

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    This is truly beautiful, the first stanza immediately sets everything up for the rest of the poem. Kudos!

    Warm regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    That was really beautiful. You did a great job of capturing that in words. Keep up the good work and take care.

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