I just need a reason

by Hans Fausto   Aug 1, 2005


Please give me a reason
Already screaming out
why must i live my life?
full of suffering and doubts

I'm seeing everyone to be so hostile
a rage lingers in my mind
friends and family..turn out to be vile
A reason now i must find

I'm turning into something else
something i cant explain
soon ill just snap
too much suffering too much pain

voices of melancholy whisper in my ears
enigma soon surrounds me
i weep, cry..everything is not so clear
confused..i would prefer to die

Soon ill lose everything..
friends and family..
even those from the beginning

I just need a reason to live
a reason to keep me from death

I just need a reason
a reason to put life in my breath

I just need a reason
to keep me going all day

I just need a reason to live
a reason to keep the reaper at bay

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  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    I cant say much cuz this is a definate 5/5
    wonder how ppl could vote such a nice poem as 4.7
    amazing stuff !!
    i like the way u put it in words
    i like the style
    lovely work
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    Amazing poem! i can really relate. it is beautyful. and thanks for the comment on my poem. it means alot. keep up the great work
    ~crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Ahh once again maybe it's like the mood im in right now it seems like there is something wrong! i can not figure it out though i think the flow may be rough but i am not certain for it seems to flow okay but maybe its not great, you rhyme well...good choice of topic...but there is just something!!! driving me crazy ill figure this out eventually lol but yea good job cause as long as nobody else can find something wrong your good to go

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    this is and awesome poem... i can relate!!
    can't wait to read more of your work... awesome!
    take care,
    xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow interesting poem...i liked it...lol...so much emotion was brought into it and man can i relate..lol..well luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

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