Intradeus

I really, really like this. You sound like you put a lot of passion in this poem even though the mood of it is apathy. Or so it seems to me. This is very nice.

I loved It
it was wicked Transcendent
Awesomely written
~HazE

I like how you ended the last line with a question mark, i think it gives the reader something to ponder over. It was over all pretty well written althoughi thought it was sometimes a little redundant, but over all a really fine job.
Lindsay

Heh, i was going to ask you what the definition was, glad you included it :P

I like it. I don't know what else to say.

Aken Sol

I think that this poem shows the battle a lot of people fight to find the peace inside.

"My little slice of heaven
has finally died."

Awesome lines. It basically sums up the rest of the poem, and it also adds a bit of sadness to it. Nice write, I'll be checking on more of your poems as soon as I have the time.

Dorotea