Scars

by DeathsRose   Aug 1, 2005


I break off a piece of my new I.D.
Making shure it's sharp enough to harm
I find one end and test it out
To my luck it slices the table like a razor
I lift up my shirt sleeve
And try to find a new place to cut
I'm told not to do it
The voices in my head are screaming
But just above my wrist there is a little space left
Just enough to harm
I grab my I.D.
And push it down
Down and in
Deeper and deeper still
Untill there is blood all over me
I do not smile
That is untill
I can feel the pain
Of my I.D. racing through my body

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tuffy

    It's a really good poem...Little scarey though, hope you're okay.
    *peace

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~ColdHope~*~

    dddddaaaammmnn.....thats was good.... i like the ending to it its kinda twisted that ya like the pain 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweeti

    hey ... ur poem is really good ... it makes me think of what i used to do. keep writing and ill check out more of your poems when u write them! alwayz -n- forever heather <3's james

  • 18 years ago

    by Brianna

    That poem is very... Bleak. With the help of a thesarus you could do better... Otherwise it is a very emotional poem and I think that you are a very talented poet. keep writing!

    Please read, rate and comment on my poem called Broken Glass..It's not one of my best but I'd love to know your opinion. Thanks muchly!

    Forever chaotic,
    The Fire Eyed Demoness

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    although that was good...kinda scary:S
    really graphic... take care x x x

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