Two hopeless teens

by ButterflyKisses_xo   Aug 1, 2005


*Really Long..But please red*

A young girl,
in love with,
the boy of her dreams.

Her life wasn't perfect,
f u c k e d up from the beginning,
but each and every day,
she acted as if she was happy.

One day she sat alone,
and starred into,
the heavy falling rain.

When she looked away,
she saw a beautiful thing,
the boy that made her smile.

"Here you go my love,
a dozen roses,
No matter how far you fall,
I'll catch you,
and no matter what goes on,
I'll always love you"

She smiled and said,
"Thank you dear,
your so very sweet,
I wouldn't be happy,
or smiling everyday,
if it wasn't for you"

The very next day,
she found that the boy she fell for,
moved very far away.

She couldn't take the pain,
she needed him,
to make it through her screwed up life.

So she grabbed onto a rope,
and tied a tight knot,
and held tightly onto a knife.

Stepping off the chair,
she quickly slit her throat,
gripping tightly onto her suicide note.

That boy she had loved,
walked in the room a second later,
to explain why,
and tell his final goodbye.

He screamed with horror,
when he saw this scary site,
he grabbed the blood stained paper,
and asked "why?"

Reading the note,
he began to cry,
because of him, His girlfriend died.

On the blood stained note,
it simply read:

"I'm sorry you found me this way,
nothing went right,
until I met the man of my life.
But now that he's gone,
I have no reason to go on"

He turned the paper over,
and quickly wrote *HIS* suicide note...

"I hurt the one I love,
I can't live without her,
so I have to leave,
I hope you can see.."

He pulled out a gun,
she hid under her bed,
put it to his head,
and pulled the trigger.

Two hopeless teens,
both found dead,
they died for love...

..R/C if you choose..

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    thats awesum darlin..5/5 keep it up

    ur awesum writer

    always

    angel

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Wow, this is really deep. Really well written... sad, and yet, so monumental. Great work, keep it up, 5/5
    Car

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    wowsers great work as always.... very intense plz dont kill urself for some jerk k? even if he is the man of ur dreams?
    love u Katie

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    nice poem really deep keep it up 5/5 your really good