I Love You

by Arora   Aug 2, 2005


I never realized
How much i loved you

Until the day you went away
and I forever missed you

I sat in my room day by day
Wiping the tears
That fell from my eyes

No one ever knew
How much I love you

Not even you knew
But deep down inside
I was all blue

I had to tell you something
But every time I opened
My mouth to speak
The words, came out weak.

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  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I liked it but it seemed choppy and forced at the end

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica V Loves U

    THis is a nice poem I know how that feels cuz i've gone through that. peace out great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    ok, good poem, well thought out, but the ending really threw me off...i don't think that's the right usage of "bleak" and that makes the rhyming seemed forced. bumpy flow, could use a little work. other than that, nice job! 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Hans Fausto

    hmm..need a little work...its kinda short and kinda gets cut at the ending...but the rest is nice...if you add a little more it could become better..:D

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