The angel

by XxFallenxFromxGracexX   Aug 4, 2005


An angel falls from the sky,
Its wing torn its heart broken,
It cries,
It falls to the ground,
It hits so hard,
But yet it makes no sound,
An angel falls from the sky,
Someones torn its soul apart,
You can see the pain in its eyes,
It screams as loud as anything,
But no one hears its calls for help,
Its trying to use its broken wing,
An angel falls from the sky,
Slowly and silently this angel dies...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen

    hey, its not as good as your other poems, but i like it its a 5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Not quite as good as it could be. The way angel's pain and all was done nicely. It has some parts that just...I don't know. It didn't help with some of the flow. Still it was good with some of the descriptions.
    ~FotF

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    wicked transcendent write i loved it
    ~HazE