Missin' You

by darkcyclenerve   Aug 4, 2005


You ask if I will miss you?
If I shall reminisce?
Within this poem is the answer
For I do promise this

Whenever near the water
Underneath a pink sunset
I shall perform this duty
To prove I won't forget

I will pick a wild flower
Covered with evening dew
Place it on the water
And send it off to you

So that God will guide it
As it drifts toward the sea
I will bless it on its journey
With words of poetry

It will cover endless miles
Over countless brooks and streams
To serve as a reminder
That you're always in my dreams

I will send it on this journey
To fulfill one fantasy
That if ever you do find it
You will think of me

So late some summer's evening
As you're walking on the beach
If a crashing wave beside you
Places a flower within your reach

Know it is a token
That rests there at your feet
Proof of love unbroken
Its journey now complete

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  • 20 years ago

    by Loulou

    Oh wow really awseome!

  • 20 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Whoa! That is so beautiful. It's flowed perfectly! I absolutely loved it....

    But in all honesty I must say that "So late some summer's evening" did throw it off a bit. It just sounds a bit funny....

    Other than that this is an excellent write!! Truly amazing!! ;)

  • 20 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    OHMYGOD! I absolutely LOVE this. You are an INCREDIBLE writer. <33 Just pure talent. =) So beautiful. This was really great. Especially the last 6 stanzas. SO touching. =*) Fantastic work! <3 Keep at it. Please. xoxoxox

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