Dying to breath

by darkcyclenerve   Feb 22, 2006


Losing faith, still hoping
inhale, im still breathing
for now, the next minutes
thats life, as what it is

death, end of everything
few chances of living
scared, i guess im not
im on my way to another path

time, it never stops
heart, beating fast
countdown, till the end of days
clock, ticking life away

reality, we have to accept
life, it surely ends
holding on, doesnt matter
dying to breath, no more air

hoping youll be able to give comments about this, this is the last piece ill submit, im not good in chosing the right words, but im glad i can still express it within this site, time is taking life out of me, just waiting for that day to come, to all the writers, keep on expressing your thoughts, do the things you love most,

take care and god bless...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really liked this. very sad, but still string. you should keep writing, you're good. Shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    Awsome poem dude. im like wow in aww