Reminiscent Youth (Senryu Attempt)

by †JustAri†   Aug 5, 2005


Sitting here I find
While I'm old, everything thrives
And will keep blooming...

*I began thinking about getting old and what it would be like to be grown, and i was content with the thought that everything else was growing old with me and that more life will be born after my time has ended...

Title suggestions would be greatly appreciated. :)

Peaces. //Ari\\

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

Senryu:
Of Japanese origin, a poem with a 5-7-5 syllabic count. Three Lines. Senryu usually have references to human nature, unlike haiku.

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  • 20 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    YES! Mwahaha!

    Thanks, Bob! :D I shall use..."Reminiscent Youth". It's just what i wanted!

    //Ari\\

  • 20 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    You show wisdom beyound your years great work

  • 20 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    It's amazing that you can try out all these poetry styles and do such a great job. Nice work sweetie.
    I've missed you latley; sorry i haven't been able to comment and stuff i've only just got back from Australia and i'm away again in a week to Fiji so :'( Take care my friend,

    Love always and forever.
    - Kals.

  • 20 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Very nice. You never cease to amaze me with so few words.
    -A

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