Holy Crap, I was not expecting that! Great job! The only problem was simply the wrong suffix. In the 6th stanza last line "Slowing filling up with dark despair" I think you meant slowly.

wow... im speechless... this is beyond amazing... wow... you're extremely talented. keep it up!
-xXx-

This is an AMAZING poem i love it great job!

*Miss Amanda

yup, totally amazing and moving write
5/5 from me, definitely deserves it
keep it up and I hope you can stay strong and maybe gradually show your true self without hiding behind the mask
hope you're ok
xx

Deeply Beautiful Sincerly And Yours Trully ♥♥The Better Nikki :) lol 5/5

great poem.
I enjoyed reading it.
you're really talented.
keep it up.
much love,
marjan

this is a beautiful poem. my favourite part was:
You're drowning gracefully in suffering
But I can't reach far enough to help you out

keep up the good work!

You have such a beautiful way with words...I mean reaaaally! I Love this one too! That inspiration is amazing...incredible work, I mean it! This may be my favorite...
Thanks.

xxx

Awesome poem!!! Inspiration is always a good thing! Makes writing flow a lot better. Thanks for your comment!!! Keep writing =)

Great poem. it flowed very well and i was albe to relate. 5/5

Thanks for pointing out my spelling mistake. Great poem. Really feeling it.

Virginia

You're writing has always impressed me, and you've always been an author i like to read your poems on, its very well written! poems dont have to rhyme to be great, and to be flat out and honest it was AWESOME!! 5/5

I love this p[oem EXCELLENT JOB

*amanda

Wow! another good one....the last stanza got me becuz at first, I thought you were talking about someone else!
Great job

Yo the way u gave imagery to the readers is just so fantastic! GREAT poem