A very different poem...
by LeXi Aug 7, 2005
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Help! i hear the scream, i see her run. hes closing in on her. i pick up my pace. i charge towards him as he grabs her hair. i feel the hard impact as i hit solid body. he falls 2 the ground i land near the girl. i crawl to her. \\\"are you all right?\\\" i said my voice cracking ever so slightly. all i get from her is a glare of death. i blink once and i\\\'m looking into my mirror... |
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18 years ago
Its not hat confusing it just shows ur personally misunderstood and confused and that isnt a crime nice write keep it up please comment and vote on Satans Soul xxx
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18 years agoby Solace
Very creative.. I loved it. Deserves nothing below a 5/5. Hope to see more poems from you soon. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:
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18 years ago
it has an emotional meaning hidden by a shell, your physical self.
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18 years ago
very cool!
kinda like a self-realization,
nice writing!
<3 ash
