Sins and a Promise

by Bryan Berry   Aug 8, 2005


I know I've done wrong by you
Out the door all my words flew
I wish I could have stayed true
But now I'm so lost without you

My sins weigh down on me
I wish this was meant to be
Please, no, don't make me flee
My sins carry me over the sea

I know I promised
After we had kissed
To see you even through the mist
Forever was what I'd wished

I know we said forever
But where are you now?
Why aren't we together?
I promised you
I thought you promised me too

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  • 18 years ago

    by Chelly

    Wow you have the same feelings one of my x boyfriend has for me. he promised me forever and gave me a ring but i threw it in the lake.lol but he cheated on me and he still wants to get back together and fufill his promise which he made to marry me. but i lost trust along with love.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelly

    Awwww
    that is sad
    but an excellent poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    That was pretty good. Heartfelt:) Good job.

    Ana*

  • 18 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    So cute though also sad . The last stanza is my fave one making the whole poem tearily.
    Thanx for commenting on my poem :-)

    Lots of love
    Sabine

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