The Bitter Ending

by Darien   Aug 8, 2005


The Bitter Ending

I'll be the biggest regret,
That will haunt your every breath.
I won't be satisfied,
Until I'm under your skin.

Dreams will never be so sweet,
You'll find it hard to fall asleep.
I'll keep coming back to you,
So you'll know what you've missed.

I'm not good at being number two,
That's why I've gotten over you.
The only words that I take back,
Are the ones lacking honesty.

To you I'll only be a friend,
But it just had it's bitter end.
So much for keeping in touch,
and acting like you did care.

You threw this friendship away,
For someone not worth the pain.
You won't love any other guy,
Now I'm gone, so here's my goodbye.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    This was a great piece, I feel like in certain angles I can relate to it, its quite strange how i relate though. Nonetheless itsa very strong piece, i lvoe how easily you can convey your emotions through your words, its a very precious gift. Im extremely magnetized to your work, Im actually adding you to my faves. in return as well!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kittie

    Great ending and lovely poem, I like alot of your work, keep writting and I'll keep reading!!! Lots O' Love
    BloodRedRose

  • 18 years ago

    by Melanie

    This poem had a very strong ending you really finished it off nicely. Though to do a nice not rhyming poem it must flow naturally and this did except in a couple of places that kinda threw it off. But i really liked all the emotion, and details.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Britty~Nloveღ

    thats really good!!!!! great job writting!!!!!! keep writting

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I'm not good at being number two,
    That's why I've gotten over you.
    The only words that I take back,
    Are the ones lacking honesty.

    Loved those lines because I and many people I know have felt that way! This was a great poem and I really enjoy the way your write!! five from me!
    ~Chelsey~

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