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by mandieD   Aug 9, 2005


Insignificant, a petal on a flower, a raindrop in a storm.
pigeon-holed, a single woman, you want me to conform.
meaningless, life in general, a fight over nothing.
pretty, a flower in itself, a cake with nice frothing.
lonely, a life all alone, company beside me yet it bores me to the bone.

insignificant, a ticking of a second, a pebble on the beach
pigeon-holed, a single mother, striving to reach.
meaningless, the way i feel for you, the things i think each day.
pretty, the dress my daughter wore, the pillow where i lay.
lonely, me here right now, wanting to talk to you but not knowing how.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Very deep, with a realisticaly sad edge to it. Perhaps you should call it Insignificant.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    awww. that was nice.. it was v deep.. nice end..
    keep it up
    nouna

  • 18 years ago

    by Patrik

    Great poem, but perhaps devide it in to more lines, where all the -> , . ! <- etc are you should break to a new line, makes it better.. I think anyways, but we all have different styles:)

    Best wishes,
    Patrik