Need To Get Out

by Kayla   Aug 9, 2005


My heart is crushed,
I'm falling apart.
I need to get away.
I need a new start.

A new start I can't have,
All because of you.
I am not a little girl!
You can't tell me what to do.

You can't tell me who to love.
Or tell me where to go.
I will do as I please,
And you don't need to know.

Just let me out.
Let me be free.
Let me choose who I am,
And what I want to be.

I need some independence.
Not have you by my side.
I will make my own rules.
That I choose to abide.

So now I am begging,
To just let me go.
Let me become,
The person I know!

*please vote and comment...I always return the favor....thanks!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Magnificent! Superb! Breathtaking! (I ran out of words, so I'm using the Thesaurus now! lol) But really, great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    hey great poem i liked it xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    very well written!! i enjoyed all of it, although its sad, but smile :) sometimes its the only thing that keeps the people who love you sane! 5/5!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Minkus

    Good flow, 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl.. great Job i only have one suggestion.. Instead of saying

    "A little girl I am not!"
    maybe say I'm not a little girl.. becuase saying it that way makes the flow a little weird. 4/5

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