What I Asked Her

by Josiah Larson   Aug 9, 2005


I can't explain why I feel this way
its been every day since last week
my brain has so many passioned confusions
my body feels all so weak

my soul has just flown away
my heart moves without a tweak
you leave me with so many questions
every thing you did was unique

my heart just burns
and my brain is growing fear
I have something to gain
but yet everything to lose

there are so many concerns
did you not see that tear
that you or I couldn't explain
I wish you would choose

the person you truly love
for I truly hoped thats me
for once you would see something is true
if you look in my eyes

you would see there is something to be proud of
you would see something so clearly
without you I can not make do
for I tell you no lies

the thing I once said
that left me with so many tear drops
its about you and I
weather you loved me or not

we laid there in your bed
as for what you said makes what I feel flops
I sat there and wondered why
for what I asked you said you cannot

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Great poem nice job...im sure a lot can relate. 5/5 keep it up...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    interesting ending...I like the wording...good work here...ugh, and that wondering why can be killer....

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    wow great job...i really liked it...5/5 keep it up...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-