Rain, Rain, go away

by JL   Aug 9, 2005


The sun is bright everywhere
except over my head
all the world loving life,
why do i feel so dead?

Rain, rain, go away
come again another day

Everyone dances in the sunshine
i shiver in the rain
people optimistic and happy
while i drown in my pain

Rain, rain, go away
come again another day

I want to see the bright side
I'm sick of how i became
Always cutting; never caring
trapped inside pain's games

Rain, rain, go away
come again another day

I'm pushing away sadness
to go dance with butterflies
I have started the mend on my life;
hope is on the rise

Rain, rain, went away
it came again another day
out came the sun, here to stay
pain cries alone, no one wants to play

**inspired by 'rain' by breaking benjamin**

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  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    Thanks Rain. You crack me up-i don't know why. But your comment made me laugh. Im retarded. Thanx again everyone XXXXX
    JL

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    That's so shadowed and gray. i love it. :) im sorry i didn't get to say this a lot, but i'm so glad you like my poems and i should start returning the favor, huh? im going to check out the poems you made :)

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    Thanks guys :)

  • 18 years ago

    by LossxOfxControl

    5/5 It's brilliantly written! Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by LossxOfxControl

    Really great! Loved it. 5/5 keep it up!

    RandomRose
    xxx