Why should I?
by Jenn Aug 9, 2005
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Sometimes i cry |
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20 years ago
by Dark Savior
I feel this in my heart and in my soul. I can feel the words on an emotional level. I loved it, it was not your ordinary poem. I loved it all
Five/Five.
P.S. thank you for commenting on my poems, i appreciate it, i've had a hard time lately so i haven't been writing, but you should see lots of new stuff from me. -
20 years ago
by Dark Savior
Really strong ending. I can feel the metaphore in your lines they almost seem to jump off the pages. The metaphore for the halls was a wonderful one, i think that it is one that i sit back and go "now why didn't i think about something like that"
Wonderful done. A masterpeice.
Five/Five
Signed,
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20 years agoby Daniel Hendrix
i know ow you feel good poem
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20 years ago
by Noelle k.
AWESOME poem. i like it. great write. it DOSNT suck. i promise. :) 5
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20 years ago
omg that is really good i like it a lot will you plz check out some of my poems and rate/comment on them it would mean a lot to me thank you
