WhAt WiLl HaPpEn?

by Perfect Failure   Aug 10, 2005


Will it ever be the same?
As how it were before
Will we ever find?
What we are desperately looking for

I try to believe,
That it wasn't you
That some how what you said,
Just wasn't true

I try to move forward,
But I’m stuck in the past
Is this going to work?
Can we make this last?

We have been through a lot,
Both you and I
Will this be then end?
Could this be good bye?

I try so hard,
To believe your care
But what you said,
How could anyone bare?

Maybe I’m not worth this,
Maybe you should leave
I’ve tride to keep it alive,
But this, it just wont breath

These are just thoughts,
Questions and suspicions
And forever will remain
Until the day our past we regain.

~* not my best i know, but i didn't know how to say what i was feeling ..any helpful hints are welcome ....*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Hey dis was gwd wat were u tlkin abt....n is dat da guy u luv??? so sweet lol...keep it up off to read sum more of yr wanda full poems lol...
    mwaz
    luv ya luv dia
    xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Kyle Schulz

    It does not matter that you did not know how to say it, you got your message across perfectly well. Your image in my mind was raw and passionate which are the best kind of poems. Keep writing and thanks for your advice!

  • 18 years ago

    by ZaCh (I LOVE YOU RENEE)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Hi well i think it was just fine.. it all went together smoothly and you expressed what you needed to.. thats 2 great things it takes to make a great poem. I think it was overall terrifiv great job.. and i would love to read more when i have more time anyways great job. if you need any advice you can contact me on my aim screen name x0xSweet Sinzx0x. but great job 5/5 xox brit xox

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