Lonley

by wendy   Aug 10, 2005


All by myself scared and lonely
the way i feel is all so phony
in a dark room only my four walls
the shadows will loom and i fear i will fall
scared and alone i sit here tonight
afraid to roam or go aflight
so alone I'll stay all night long
and all the day life is so wrong

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    "in a dark room only my four walls
    the shadows will loom and i fear i will fall" those lines are very cool and well writen. i like this poem short simple and gets the idea across to the reader well done.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by +-Unique J-+

    Nice lyrics they sound really nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Wow i like that, it feels like it needs sum sort of ending tho.....i like

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    I have been there, been there so much. thx for your comment 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    U got the rhythm's down with ur rhyming and flowing,.. id like to see more visuals and imagery,.. metaphors.. but some people dont use that style,.. i myself use it to the fullest.. 4/5

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