My prayer

by wendy   Aug 29, 2005


Your heart will ache your soul will cry

you pray to god and wonder why

this old world is going strait to hell

while the churches all still ring the bell

you pray to god and pay your dues

and you still feel like singing the blues

you wish that you could change things now

but you do not know the why, when, or how

you hope that prayer will help you through

until you go to heaven and become anew

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  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    I Loved It Loved It Loved It! What More Can I Say Than 5.0?...This Poem Burst With Talent And Skill, I Can Tell That You Write From The Heart *Hugs* *Friends For Life* 5/5 All The Way! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth

    Love the emotion you put into this one, I'll have to give you a 5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    Whoah.... that was so amazing. just by reading one piece, i can already tell your an awesome poet. 5/5 also, its all completely true

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    The last line is very beautiful and creates a lovely image. I'm sorry, i forgot to write in My Challenge that if you attempt I will r/r/c on 2 of your poems.
    but you do not know the why, when, or how
    i suggest you get rid of 'the'.
    nice poem, the idea was well done, the rymeing scheme was great, and the structure was unique. good job, 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Short and got right to the point. i liked it alot. good choice of words

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