A childs cry

by wendy   Aug 10, 2005


Sometimes in the night
i dream of a child's cry
so scared and alone
the child is a boy
the child is a girl
i don't really know
i try hard to see a face
but it wont come to me
oh but soon i will see
that child is beautiful
a full grown man my son

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    I think i understand the point of the poem that you are a mother trying to understand a cry and you find out in the end that it was your son all along. a couple of times the flow didn't go so smooth and it could have been a little better in those areas. the other two i've read from you were better i would have to say. but keep up the good work.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I don't quite see what you are trying to say...maybe if you expand...

    xxx

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