Breathing

by AllHailTheHeartbreaker   Aug 10, 2005


-deep breath-
It'll be OK;
Maybe he won't notice
That you've been crying.
-inhale-
Hope he won't notice
My tear-stained face
-exhale-
He walks up
-hold breath-
His smile fades
-look away-
He asks what is wrong
-sigh-
I shake my head
And refuse to divulge
What is wrong
-breath-
He asks again
Grasping my wrist
And looking me in the eye
-another deep breath-
I don't want to tell him
About my parent's fight
But I do
-sigh again-
He comforts me
Like a good friend should
-breathing gets steady-
And hold me close.

*Just was bored & wanted to write something a little out-of-the-oridinary. Hope you guys like it.
-Kate

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  • 18 years ago

    by Shelby G.

    This is out of the ordinary, is so original. one more fantastic job, I liked how it associates with how someone would really hold their breath and/pr sigh in such a situation. 5/5

    -Shel

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very creative and unique! The poem was full of emotion! Brooke~

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