My Love I'll Give You Everything (Triolet)

Short, yet powerfull.
Really like this one.
Great work.

I really liked this poem, It's short but really good! I loved it. 5/5 for me. Luvs, DeadGirl

Good intentions! Love the warmth from this piece! 4/5

Short and sweet. you got all the true feelings of love in this write!
5/5

This is lovely......I looked you up here because I read your comment on the Romeo&Juliet thread, and I just want to tell you this.....29 years ago, come October,
a man walked by me at work..As he whisked by, I caught a glimpse of his...profile..hair..walk...everything really...at that instant I gasped for air in recognition of Love.....(of course, there's a longer 'story' but).....We are, in fact, still together.....still living in that Love.....from a first sighting to a real Life.....to these certainties:.....that Love at first sight can...and does...happen......that Soul-mates do indeed manifest...and, that Karma is The Thread Of All Threads!
Have a wonderful Life...