Like a whisper

by Tiny Reader   Aug 11, 2005


I can't see you.
Like a whisper
You're barely heard.
I can't feel you
Can not picture
Where you are now.

It pains me to think
That my memories are a blur
Of a long lost love
That won't let me move on.

It hurts me to think
Of your new life thats been built
When it doesn't include
Us in the centre.

And now I can't see you
Your voice is a whisper
I can barely hear.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Patrik

    I liked it... sort of, something feelt a little bit off, not quite sure what:(

    Best wishes,
    Patrik