Our Get-Away

by Kayla   Aug 11, 2005


You and me together.
The wind blowing in our hair.
We had to get away,
Away out of there.

People don't approve of us.
They don't understand our love.
They look at what has come and gone.
Instead of what we're made of.

But our love, it is amazing.
It is strong and it is true.
We will always be on top,
No matter what we go through.

We know we're meant to be.
That is why we got away.
We don't care what you all think,
Let alone what you say.

You can't tell us we're not real,
That we'll never make it through.
Because we don't care to listen,
We know our love is true!

*this is about me and my boyfriend....baby i love you!!!! please rate and comment i always return the favor!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Great poem! Beautiful! I enjoyed it and I'm sure many people can relate! Love ya lots!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    That was great, 5/5, the rymeing was excellent, your flow was perfect, and I enjoyed the poem itself, great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    Great poem.. very cute =D 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    Pretty good.. decent flow and rhyme.. the following line doesnt sit well with me for some reason.. my head keeps wanting to change it it.. away from there.. even th0 that would interrupt the flow.. it just seems awkward to me as is.. anyway good job.. love, like writing, is a good get away.. i agree..

    We had to get away,
    Away out of there.

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    Cute poem...5/5